Monday, 10 May 2010
Things that need changing:
- Titles on black screen cut, have the titles on the opening footage alternatively.
- Soundtrack fading into "SIMPLAZ" animation.
- Different version of soundtrack to match the footage on screen, and a shorter version
- Voice over redoing to match Australian accent used in the second scene.
- Voice over shortening
- Kettle filming to show the boiling along with the anger building up in the scene
- A close up of the cup being knocked over
- Paul included in the awkward silence